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大學/英美語文學類
My name is OO O. I graduated from OO O University of O in 20XX with a major in Foreign Language Inst....修改建議：
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大學/中國語文學類
My name is OO. I have a degree in Chinese Literature, graduating from OO University in OO, Taiwan in....修改建議：
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大學/貿易學類
My name is O-O O. I’m a OO-year-old Aquarius who is passionate, serious and responsible. I graduated....修改建議：
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大學/食品科學類
I graduated from the OOOO Department of OO University. I currently work at the shipping department a....修改建議：
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大學/區域研究學類
Biography: OOO O O O I am studying at O University with double majors in the Department of O O O ....修改建議：
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大學/其他教育學類
O O OOO — INTRODUCTION FAMILY BACKGROUND I come from Taiwan; my father is an executive, my mothe....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
I am O-O O. I am OO years old. My family and friends describe me as a confident, independent, outgoi....修改建議：
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碩士/公共行政學類
After [x] years living in the OO and completing a social science degree at the University of O O, I ....修改建議：
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大學/企業管理學類
My name is ＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯＯ ＯＯＯ. I was born to a happy and democratic family in ＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯ District in Greate....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Autobiography My English name is ＯＯＯＯＯ ＯＯ, and I am ＯＯ years old. I am married and have two childre....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Autobiography It is my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself to you. My name is Ｏ....修改建議：
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大學/企業管理學類
Personal Statement - ＯＯＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯ My name is ＯＯＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯ and I would like to apply for the position ....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
AUTOBIOGRAPHY My name is Ｏ, I grew up in a simple, but happy family consisting of five members, wit....修改建議：
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大學/企業管理學類
Resume Personal data Name Ｏ-Ｏ Ｏ Gender Ｏ Age Ｏ years old Date of bi....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Biography Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ, and my English name is Ｏ. I’m Ｏ-Ｏ years old, and I am the eldest....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
To briefly state a few of the most common things: My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ. I was born in Ｏ, and grew up in ....修改建議：
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碩士/資訊工程學類
CURRICULUM VITAE Name: Ｏ-Ｏ Lu (Ｏ Lu) DOB: Ｏ 00, 0000 Marital Status: Marrie....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
AUTOBIOGRAPHY: My name is Ｏ, I expect to be graduate from Ｏ University in June. Because my parent....修改建議：
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