國外業務
1~5年經驗／大學／德文語文學類
Biography Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ. I am ＯＯ years old and come from a wonderful area in Taiwan with a great culture: Ｏ. There are four members in my family: my parents, my younger sister and me. Since I left my hometown to study in Kaohsiung, I have become a very independent person. I will graduate from Ｏ Ｏ College of Languages this month with a major in Ｏ. During my studies, I participated in a wide variety of activities and courses. One of the experiences that stood out most was when I took a course on the “Meetings, Incentives, Conferencing, Exhibitions” (MICE) approach to tourism. After making a thorough study of the topic – which included familiarizing myself with the intricacies of the MICE approach, how to prepare a proposal and how to receive guests – I received a group of tourists from a cruise ship. When most of them turned out to be from Germany, I was delighted to be able to use my German language ability to act as a bridge between the tourists and vendors. This was an amazing experience that taught me a great deal about how to interact and deal with a variety of people. I would love to be able to communicate and build relationships with people from all over the world. In my second year of college I visited Germany as an exchange student. The experience not only helped improve my German but also enabled me to experience German culture first-hand. With a positive and open-minded attitude, I was able to step out of my comfort zone and try something new. I learned to express my thoughts more accurately and was able to experience and think about things that I had just heard or read about. I also worked in a business environment where I handled a number of tasks such as handling letters of credit and interfacing with customs brokers. In my fourth year of college, I chose international trade as my elective subject. I encountered significant differences between theoretical course work and reality, which was quite frustrating at first, but by working hard and persisting, I believe I have succeeded in bridging the gap. By conquering the things that had once threatened to overwhelm me, these obstacles have become a source of inspiration and have made me more confident and optimistic about my ability to handle challenges and solve problems. Even though I have not been working for such a long time, I have realized that I learned much more from my practical experiences than I had thought at the time. I look forward to putting the theory I have learned into practice effectively. I sincerely hope that I can get the opportunity to join your team. If given the opportunity, I will strive to contribute to the company’s operations to the best of my abilities. I will work hard and learn whatever I need to in order to be able to do an excellent job. Thank you for your time.
I removed the comma from the way you spell your name and made it “Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ,” which is a more usual form. Please change it back if you prefer the original.
I changed “a country” to “an area,” as I’m not sure if you’re talking about Ｏ County, Ｏ City or the new Greater Ｏ.
I changed “I will graduate...this June” to “this month.”
You don’t explain what “MICE” means, so I changed it to “Meetings, incentives, conferencing, exhibitions,” otherwise your reader might not understand what you’re talking about. Please change it if this is not what you meant by “MICE.”
In cases like “I was really delighted,” “delighted” is such a strong word that you don’t need “really.”
It’s unnecessary to say “I applied for an exchange student in Germany and had pleasure to be an exchange student” – you can just say “I visited Germany as an exchange student.” This implies that you applied to go.
I am not sure what you mean by “I worked as an assistant “ – could you perhaps describe your job a bit more at this point?
I’m also not exactly sure what you mean by “second year of 2-year College” and “In my fourth year of five-year College,” so I just used “second year” and “fourth year.”
It’s not clear what you mean by “I did not work so long for this company” – could you make this a bit clearer? Are you working for this company right now? Which company is it? What is its name and what kind of business does this company do? It might also be good to say when exactly you worked there.
When you use the future tense, or say “I look forward to...,” you don’t need to add “in the future.”