機械工程師

1~5年經驗/碩士/機械工程學類

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O O O
OF., No.O, O St., O Dist.,
O O City 000, Taiwan (R.O.C.)
Phone (Home): +886-0-00000000
Phone (Cell): +886-900-000-000
Email: O@yahoo.com.tw

Education
O O O University, Master of Engineering Sept. 2005 - June 2007
Major: Mechanical Engineering

O O-O University, Bachelor of Engineering Sept. 2001 - June 2003
Major: Biomechatornic Engineering

O O University, Associate of Engineering Sept. 1996 - June 2001
Major: Mechanical Engineering

Work Experience
RD Enginer Aug. 2007 - current
Research and Development, O Co., Ltd. O Developed new products and analyzed abnormal problems with the products Used Design of Experiments (DOE) and AutoCAD to design new product shapes and determine numerical optimization Tasked with cost cutting and process improvement. Worked closely with South Korean, Japanese, and Taiwanese customers.

Conferences
 2007: Simulation of an Atomic Force Microscopy’s Probe Considering Damping Effect, COMSOL Conference in Taipei.
 2007: Simulation of an Atomic Force Microscopy’s Probe Considering Damping Effect, CSME24th at O O O University.

Certificate/License
Level C computer assisted mechanical drawing technician
Level B pneumatic technician

Computer Skills
Microsoft Excel, Word, Outlook, PowerPoint and Matlab.

Language Skills
Fluent in Mandarin Chinese
Proficient listening, speaking, writing and reading in English.

Autobiography

My name is O O.

I graduated from O O O University’s Mechanical Engineering Graduate School in 20OO. My master thesis was entitled "OOOO". My research was selected for presentation at the 24th Taiwanese National Conference on Mechanical Engineering and the COMSOL conference in Taipei in 2007.

During my time at university, I acquired two certificates from the Taiwanese Council of
Labor Affairs, recognizing my skills as a Level C computer assisted mechanical drawing technician and a Level B pneumatic technician.

After attaining my masters degree in engineering, I began working at O Technology Company as a RD engineer, where I first worked on troubleshooting problems with our products and providing the best solutions for our customers.

My work at O has since shifted to being primarily in charge of devising new products, improving existing products and establishing optimal design parameters, such as the selection and testing of new materials and shapes, accounting for stress and structural analysis. This work experience has made me learn a lot about the importance of good communication skills and I have also learned that it is sometimes necessary to change my perspective and approach when tackling a problem.

In my spare time, I enjoy jogging, hiking and swimming. In addition, I study English everyday, which is a necessary for when I need to communicate with international clients and customers. I am a very diligent worker because I believe that through hard work, any problem can be solved.

I believe that my enthusiasm to learn new things will help me quickly adjust to a new work environment with ease. I hope you will give me the chance to prove myself.

修改建議:
Resume:
1)A very strong resume with just a few grammar corrections

Autobiography:
1)For a job in the US, remember that a cover letter is the norm, which typically contains no information about your family. Rather, the letter should start with a personalized sentence about the job you are applying for. For example: I am interested in applying for the advertised position for an RD engineer.

2)People who read your letter might not be familiar with O, so it would be good to include a description of what the company specializes in

3)I would advise against mentioning any weakness you might have, so I rewrote your sentence about being diligent to emphasize that you are a hard worker.