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My name is O O O, and I was born on O. O, in O. [What year?]
As the youngest child, with an older brother and sister, my parents raised me with strict but democratic discipline. This resulted in my independent personality and responsible attitude. My parents taught us to live in harmony with other people. My family life was loving and secure, and allowed me to prosper. My family members are all working and I want to follow in their footsteps as soon as possible.

I graduated from O University’s Management College and majored in O. During my studies I visited many institutions and worked hard. I always try my best to learn, no matter what the outcome will be. On my visits to institutions I gained valuable experience, through getting to know the company and learning how to work with other people. At college I studied statistical theory; how to use statistics software, for example, SAS, SPSS or R; analyzing the reporting of data; and estimating outcomes. I also joined other management department programs to gain financial knowledge.

In my senior year I was the leader of a team with the designated topic of retirement of issues. I was responsible for integrating the data and reaching a conclusion for our research. I had to study the topic to gain a better understanding of our research, and also with the rest of my team analyzed a lot of data and searched for applicable literature needed. Through this work we learned how to recognize retirement system problems and how to present our ideas. I gained experience in analyzing and troubleshooting retirement systems and how to lead a team.

I am looking forward to giving my best for my job. I plan to strengthen my specialty and gain financial licenses, for example, Securities Specialist or the Futures Specialist. If hired, I will bring with me my enthusiasm and dedication, and contribute with my expanded skill sets.

“No pain, no gain” is the philosophy I believe in.

修改建議:
I did not see the resume, so I cannot deliver a critique on that. The autobiography was not well written and certain information, like the year of birth, was left out. It was a bit too long and should focus more on work experience.