銀行辦事員
1~5年經驗／碩士／經濟學類
Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ No.Ｏ, Ｏ 2nd Rd., Ｏ Township, Ｏ County Ｏ, R.O.C. Ｏ / Ｏ Ｏ@hotmail.com ========================= Education Ｏ Ｏ University, R.O.C. September 20Ｏ – June 20Ｏ Master of Ｏ Graduated in top 10% of class Ｏ Ｏ University, R.O.C. September 20Ｏ – June 20Ｏ Bachelor of Ｏ Graduated in top 10% of class Extracurricular activity Dance Club Learned jazz dance Cross-Strait Creativity Administration Camp Member of livelihood division Excellent performance in Cross-Strait Creativity Administration Project Aborigine Club Participated in summer and spring volunteer camps Assisted in aboriginal dance and clothing shows Work experience Ｏ-Ｏ Ｏ Firm Served as accounting assistant Recorded source documents of transaction and entered them into the accounting system to generate summons Helped customers with business tax declarations Department of Ｏ, Ｏ Ｏ University Served as assistant Helped professor mark exam papers Awards, Honors, Scholarships The Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ Scholastic Honor Society at Ｏ Ｏ University – June 20Ｏ The Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ Scholastic Honor Society at Ｏ Ｏ University – June 20Ｏ The General Association of Ｏ-Ｏ Ｏ Scholarship – November 20Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ University Honorable Receptionist – September 20Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ University Presidential Award – 20Ｏ-20Ｏ License Trust Representative (November 20Ｏ) For taking「Investment Trust and Consulting Regulations (including Self-disciplinary Rules) only」(January 20Ｏ) Language Skills Mandarin Chinese Basic Hakka and Taiwanese English: TOEIC Ｏ/Ｏ (May 29, 20Ｏ) Computer Skills Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft PowerPoint and PhotoShop English: 35 wpm Chinese: 70-80 wpm Personal Background Grew up in Ｏ. Completed 4 weeks of English language study at International Language Schools of Ｏ. Traveled in Ｏ for 2 months to experience different cultures and learn English. Interests include playing the piano and hiking. Autobiography My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ and I have a Master’s degree in Ｏ from Ｏ Ｏ University. During my four years as an undergraduate at Ｏ Ｏ University, I studied hard in courses including, among others, microeconomics and international trade. Graduate school provided me with a solid academic training and helped teach me how to deal with problems and do research. As a student I received excellent grades and was selected as an honorary member of the Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ Scholastic Honor Society. I really enjoyed my school life. Although my work load was heavy, I kept a balance between my studies and extracurricular activities. For example, I participated in the aborigine club. Through such activities, I not only made many friends but also gained different valuable experiences. They also helped me learn how to get along with others. l like reading novels in my free time, especially science fiction. I also enjoy playing the piano, which I find therapeutic. I have an active side too and enjoy hiking and dancing, which help me stay healthy and energetic. I am hard-working, responsible and highly motivated. I always try my best and never give up. With my characteristics, I hope to fulfill my goals in the near future. Furthermore, I am willing to help others. My friends say I am optimistic and friendly. Although I have not had extensive work experience yet, I will work even more diligently. With my abilities and background I am confident that I am qualified to be an effective employee.
Made a few corrections on resume, for example the academic subject is ‘Economics’not ‘Economy’ and ‘Extracurricular’ is the correct adjective, not ‘Extra-Curriculum.’Also no comma after surname and lower case on second given name, so Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ not Ｏ, Ｏ-Ｏ.
Sometimes needed to correct use of tenses in autobiography, for example, when writing about studying at school past tense was needed, not present. Also removed references to family as the resume and autobiography are to be used to apply for a job in the USA and this kind of information would not normally be found on such English-language documents.
Overall, writing was clear and easy to understand.