品保工程師

1~5年經驗/大學/化學工程學類

修改後自傳:

I was born in O, O, on OO, OOOO, and I spent most of my childhood and school years there. I have three older sisters in my family. My father is a civil servant and my mother is a businesswoman.

When I was a student, I always studied hard at school. Besides gaining book knowledge, physical chemistry is my favorite subject. I find the subject very interesting and captivating. While studying I also learned how to get along with different people and make friends, but I also enjoy my own company. I like to travel and I have several hobbies, such as playing basketball, hiking and swimming.

I am an ambitious person and always do my best at whatever work I do, and I am confident that I can persevere with any task I am given, no matter how difficult or complicated, until it is finished satisfactorily.
During my studies I discovered that there are many benefits and much to learn from using the learning experience, and then I realized the importance of experience. I studied diligently and although the work load was quite large, I tried hard to keep a balance between studying and extracurricular activities.

Aside from academic work, I am quite self-confident and have always persisted in staying focused on my plans for the future. To reach my goals, I have tried my best through carefully mapping out my schedule in the hope that my life will proceed in the way I want. I now know that this is not always possible and my plans may need to be adjusted to suit changing circumstances, but because I am a solid and persevering person who always strive to meet my goals, I am sure I will be successful.
I also enjoy overcoming obstacles and completing tasks no matter how difficult they are. This means I will accomplish my goals step by step.

I am hoping to join your company as a research and development engineer, where I will work to the best of my ability to reach the company’s goals, as well as my own.

修改建議:
The resume is very short and does not give a lot of detail, while the autobiography has a bit too much detail about the applicant’s personality. The applicant should spend more time on putting more detail into the resume, e.g. what fields he studied in which subjects, the topic of workpieces and work experience.