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O O
H: +886 (00)-0000-0000
C: +886 (0900)-000-000
OO@gmail.com
No.0, O Ond Lane, O O, O O 000, Taiwan
Objective
I am seeking a sales assistant position where my proven ability to meet deadlines under pressure will be of value

Relevant Skills Summary
- Problem solving and quick thinking.
- Proficient with Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint
- Observant, goal-oriented, adaptable, easygoing, cooperative and a fast learner.

Education
O O University

Graduate School, Department of Foreign Languages, June 20OO
- Linguistics coursework included: Syntax, Phonology, Applied Linguistics, Sociolinguistics, Psycholinguistics

O O University, O

Bachelor of Business Administration in Finance, June 20OO
- Emphasis on investment
- Finance coursework included: Financial Management, Corporate Finance, Intermediate Accounting I II, Derivative Securities, Financial Case Studies

Languages, Certificates, Work Experience
- Language: Native speaker of Mandarin and Taiwanese, Fluent in English
- Certificates: Trust representative, TOEIC 845
- Work Experience: English Consultant at O O University Language Center, OO Teaching Assistant, Invigilator for 20OO OO My name is O O-O. I am seeking a sales assistant position where my proven ability to meet deadlines under pressure will be of value.

When I was young and encountered a problem or challenge, my parents would not assist me right away and instead encouraged me to solve the problem on my own. Consequently, I have developed an independent and self-conscious ability to problem solve.

I majored in finance at university, where I took courses that included accounting, economics, statistics, international finance, business English, etc. In my spare time, I also read newspapers and magazines to gain additional knowledge about the business world. In addition to my financial background, I have been interested in learning English since I was in junior high school. I frequently read material in English, practice speaking with my friends and watch Western TV news. Through hard work, I am proficient at reading and writing in English, as
evidenced by my TOEIC certificate.

To pursue my interest in English, I enrolled in the applied linguistics group at O O University’s Department of Foreign Languages. I took courses that focused on syntax, phonology, psycholinguistics, sociolinguistics and applied linguistics. Although these courses emphasized very different aspects of linguistics, they all stressed the importance of theoretical discussion and practical analysis. In addition, I worked as an English consultant at the university’slanguage center and as a teaching assistant for English classes. My main responsibility was to help and assist students who were having problems learning English. Through this interaction, I learned important lessons about how to maintain a constructive working relationship with clients, as well as the difference between theory and practice.

I wish to apply what I have learned, as well as my talents and my skills, to be a productive employee for your organization. I value the importance of continually learning and in my free time I want to attend any available course and activities (whether offered by your company or outside organizations) to add to my individual value, professional ability and accumulated experiences.

修改建議:
Resume:
1)Under the education section, write the name of the degree you got from OOOO (MA I assume) as well as the starting and finishing dates of your studies so employers can see how much time you spent to get your degree

2)I would make Work Experience its own category, similar to Education

3)Remember that you are applying for a job in the US, so they will not be as familiar with all the things on your resume, such as the O is O O University, or what a Trust Representative certificate is. It is okay to
elaborate on the certificate

4)I would stress your language ability. It is sad to say, but some people in the US who read your resume might not know that Mandarin is spoken in Taiwan

Autobiography:
1)For a job in the US, remember that a cover letter is the norm, which typically contains no information about your family. Rather, the letter should start with a personalized sentence about the job you are applying for. I included the sentence from your Objective sentence of the resume to provide a general sense of how the letter should start.

2)Overall, it was well written and it was good that you included the lessons that your work experience at the university taught you. It is important to really sell yourself.