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PAST AND FUTURE

I received my master’s degree in Mechanical Engineering in 2000. I worked as a research assistant on vibration analysis in a project that involved the nondestructive evaluation of candle filters, which was sponsored by the OOOOOOO OOOOOO OOOOOOOOOO Center at the Department of OOOOOO.

After school, my first job was as advanced program purchasing analyst and involved total cost management at OOOO OOOOO Company (OOO) in Taiwan. My main duties at OOOO were monitoring operations of OOOO’s downstream companies and helping them stay strong both financially and technically amid a slow-down in the economy.

Later on, I also earned some working experience at OOOOOO Corp in Pasadena, California. OOOOOO designs, manufactures and markets electrical interconnect components for international customers. In 2004, I joined OOOOOOO OOOOO Corp (OOO), where I worked in pre-sales and project management on wireless solutions and products.

In the past few years, I have mainly been working with wireless and multimedia products for brand-name telecoms customers in a project management and pre-sales capacity.

I am always seeking opportunities to further my understanding of and improve my skills in high-technology and global business environments. Hopefully, my experience and skill-set can be of great value to the company I work for, as well as to my colleagues. As a quick learner, working in an industry-leading company is always my first priority. If given the opportunity, I am eager and determined to do my best to help take your company to the next level.

修改建議:
I reorganized the information slightly and made the formatting clearer, more organized and more consistent to make it easier for the hiring manager who will read this to find relevant information. I also moved “Position applied for...” to the top.

Make subheadings like “Responsibility/Responsibilities,” “Achievement/Achievements” and “Key Skill of Developed:/Key Skills Developed” consistent – for example, I made them all “Responsibilities:” or “Achievements:” I also added colons (:) to all of them to create a better impression.

Avoid using abbreviations or acronyms that are not well-known – don’t just assume the employer will know what you mean. I was not sure what “ reply RFI” means. I changed it to “replying to requests for information,” but I am just guessing, so please fix it if it’s wrong. I was also not sure what “STB project” means, so I left it unchanged, but please write out what is meant (Like “set-top box project,” for instance.)

I changed “RD/PM/QA” to “research and development, project management and quality assurance” – again just guessing, so please check if this is correct!

I was not sure what “Keep projects promising running with top 3 brand company among the world.” I changed it to “Built up projects to bring the company into the top 3 global brands.” Please check.

When referring to a specific date, use “on” (on Jan. 1), but when just listing the month or year, use “during” or “in” (in January, during 2012).

Make sure you use the correct spelling for institutions you studied at: I changed “Elberley College of Art Science of West Virginia University” to “Eberly College of Arts and Sciences.”

In your biography you mention that you worked at Ford Motor Co – you should also include this in the resume section under experience, even if only briefly.