國外業務

1~5年經驗／大學／企業管理學類

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My name is ＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯＯ ＯＯＯ. I was born to a happy and democratic family in ＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯ District in Greater ＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯ. My parents manage a furniture store and I have two siblings. My parents are diligent businesspeople. From them, I learned business skills including basic accounting. My mother took courses in business administration, which inspired in me an interest in finance. My parents' support has given me plenty of opportunities to pursue advanced studies concerning business.

I like to listen to English-language music in my free time. This not only helps me relax, but gain more knowledge, because I learn the lyrics. I also enjoy cooking. By doing so, I can ease my mother's workload, and at the same time, I develop a valuable life skill.

In my school years, I learned how to get along well with others. I graduated from National ＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯ University of Applied Sciences, where I majored in business administration. I studied very hard because I knew I had to pursue advanced studies. I’ve learned to take good advantage of every minute of the day, to communicate with my classmates and to do everything efficiently. I have also been very active in extracurricular activities. For example, during the World Games ＯＯＯＯ in ＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯ, I was a dancer in the opening ceremonies.

There is a saying that "everyone wants happiness without any pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain." With this in mind, I try to work hard and fulfill my obligations. By gathering knowledge and learning from people with more experience, I believe I will make it one day.

I am a reliable, motivated and friendly person. My work experience has given me the chance to train myself and given me skills that can easily be applied to different situations and tasks. I am a fast learner, and with little assistance can successfully perform any task. I am open to any type of work that will provide me with valuable practical experience that I can use to launch my career. I believe that I can be a productive member of your team and do work I can take pride in.

修改建議：
Well-written autobiography. When talking about your career objectives, be much more specific; you should demonstrate that you have a clear goal and know how to achieve it.

When applying to Western companies, rework your autobiography into cover letter format, and tailor your cover letters to each specific position and firm.