國外業務
6年以上經驗／大學／英美語文學類
JENNIFER Ｏ.Ｏ. LIN Ｏ@hotmail.com 0900-000-000 PERMANENT ADDRESS ＯF,No.Ｏ,Lane Ｏ Sec. Ｏ, Ｏ Ｏ Street Ｏ, Ｏ 00000 Phone: (000) 0000-000 __________________________________ June 12, 2000 Dear Madam or Sir: I am writing in response to the position you have advertised in Ｏ Ｏ to Ｏ Ｏ, in the Ｏ Of Ｏ and Ｏ. Please accept this cover letter and attached CV and supporting documents as my application for this position. I have extensive knowledge of business English, having studied it in Ｏ, Ｏ, and majored in Applied English at Ｏ Ｏ University of Technology. I also offer a deep knowledge of Mainland Chinese culture that enables me to communicate very effectively with Mainland Chinese. During my four years of study in Ｏ’s Special Economic Zone, I built up friendships with people from many different cultural and linguistic backgrounds. As a result, I am capable of alleviating communication problems we may face when doing business. Moreover, contracts used for trade are carefully written and ensuring clarity in English-language contracts saves money, so a business English specialist such as myself is an asset to any organization. As Winston Churchill said, “I have nothing to offer but blood, toil, tears and sweat.” Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications in person. Sincerely yours, Lin, Ｏ-Ｏ Enclosures: 1. Resume 2. Certificates 3. Awards records JENNIFER Ｏ.Ｏ. LIN Ｏ@hotmail.com 0900-000-000 PERMANENT ADDRESS ＯF.No.Ｏ,Lane Ｏ, Sec. Ｏ, Ｏ Ｏ Street, Ｏ, Ｏ 00000 Phone: (00) 0000-000 __________________________________ OBJECTIVE To work in Shipping Affairs to Mainland China, in the Ministry Of Transportation and Communications, as an active, enthusiastic and well-prepared worker who is dedicated to excellent job performance. EDUCATION Ｏ Ｏ University of Technology (Ｏ) Bachelor of Arts in Applied English 06/0000 (Expected) Ｏ Ｏ High School (Ｏ) EXPERIENCE Staff of Ｏ (Student Association of Global Affairs) (0000-0000) Organized weekly discussion of global news and events with professors and students Asia section leader for Model United Nations conference Chief administrator in Ｏ Ｏ in Ｏ (0000-0000) In charge of handouts preparation, order and other TAs roll call in an English environment Vice President of Students of Dormitory Council (2007-2011) Organized activities and solved problems; acted as voice for dormitory residents Member of Ｏ English/Chinese Gazette (0000-0000) Offered training in English-language sentence construction Member of Ｏ Club - Friends of Foreign Students (0000-0000) Helped and befriended foreign students and facilitated communication with school administration SKILLS Computer: Microsoft Office, Photoshop, Dreamweaver Languages:Fluent in conversational English, basic conversational Japanese, basic conversational Taiwanese. HONORS/ACTIVITIES Honorable Mention in Model United Nations Conference Ｏ Ｏ scholarship Ｏ Ｏ scholarship Ｏ scholarship The coordinator of Applied English Department for Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ School Outstanding Students Summer Campaign - visited Ｏ and other cities Annually as First Prize award in Ｏ Ｏ High School (Ｏ) Award for Prominent Essay on International Trade (Xiamen)
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