特別助理
1~5年經驗／大學／英美語文學類
修改後自傳：
I am an open-minded, self-motivated, positive and independent person who is interested in people and how to help them. I enjoy keeping fit and reading. I have a knack for finding the right information in important situations, which fits well with my work experience in marketing, business planning and communications. My work experience has taught me to be thorough and attentive in arranging schedules and documents, as well as making sure multiple parties are on the same page. My English skills are good and I am proficient with technology. I am very interested in the [name of position] role with [company name] and I hope to hear from you soon.
修改建議：
Personalize the application for the position. Add [name of position] and [company name]
Don’t tell stories in your introduction. Stories work best in a conversation where they are appropriate and useful.
Use your past experience to tell a story of your traits and abilities. The third paragraph is an example taken from the work experience you listed.
You might also add experience gained from your time at university, or in sports groups or others.
Personalize the application for the position. Add [name of position] and [company name]
Don’t tell stories in your introduction. Stories work best in a conversation where they are appropriate and useful.
Use your past experience to tell a story of your traits and abilities. The third paragraph is an example taken from the work experience you listed.
You might also add experience gained from your time at university, or in sports groups or others.