國際貿易人員
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I. Summary I developed a sense of responsibility and realized the importance of hard work at an early age as the eldest of O children with working parents. Every day after school, I looked after my younger siblings before our parents returned from work. I am a positive and easygoing person. I enjoy working independently as much as participating in team work. That is why I studied international trade in university and focused on marketing management in my postgraduate studies. I am passionate about sharing innovative and technological products with my customers. I enjoy facing challenges and solving problems, because they allow me to develop skills that I can use to overcome challenges yet to come. I would like to be a part of your team, given that this job has great potential to help me reach my career goals. When I was younger, my aim was to to expand my horizon and gain experience. I worked hard and gained experience to save money in order to study abroad. At school, I was exposed to diverse opinions from my classmates while discussing case studies. This experience allowed me to think about my career direction. Working hard is very important for me; this is my mentality when seeking a job. I always do my best to complete a task assigned to me. II. Work Experience: 1. O O Engineering Co Ltd Located in O, this company allowed me to gain experience abroad. I enjoyed working with local colleagues and analyzing data, which I believe helped me improve skills that were essential for my career. I learned to analyze data logically and learned how to work with a group people from diverse backgrounds. While working at this position, I learned how to combine organizational skills, marketing analysis and effective communication. I was the leader of a team that handled data analysis for certain projects during the yearly earnings period. 2. O O Electronics Co I was appointed to the O O to develop the company's business there, where I set up new sales channels. While working at this position, I successfully launched O marketing channels in O O, O and O, increasing yearly revenue by OO percent. The company participated in local exhibitions and promoted their products. I was responsible for producing a demo video that attracted prospective buyers. We placed bids in multiple government tenders, some of which were not successful, which in turn allowed me to learn from failure. 3. O O International Corp As a dedicated employee, I enjoyed working in a team and worked in projects with multiple clients. I planned and managed work schedules and delivered projects on time to customers. The team in which I worked always completed the assigned projects ahead of schedule. This experience taught me important skills, specifically time management, and effective communication between my team and clients. 4. O International Development Co The most challenging aspect of this job was cost analysis and price negotiation between suppliers and buyers. I learned how to establish long-term partnerships, as well as calculate fees and negotiate with multiple parties.
You should start your CV by providing information about yourself, not your family. You should express your personal and professional strengths quickly and clearly so that your prospective employer can see them at a glance.
I rewrote the first paragraph to bring the focus on you and your strengths, instead of your family history and your parents' past careers.
Next time you want to write something like the first paragraph, you could start by first writing your strengths and then explain how you obtained those qualities. For example, you could say:
"I am a very hard-working person because I needed to take care of my siblings when my parents were at work, etc."
Instead of:
"My parents were always working late and my siblings and I were left home alone. Being the eldest of them, I had to take care of them, etc. etc. etc. Therefore, I am a very hard-working person."
It would be better to provide the name of the university you graduated from. You have written that you have graduate and post-graduate degrees, but you have not written where you have obtained them.
It is good that you have divided your CV and your work history into sub-sections. However, it would be better if you provide years of entry and exit for the jobs you have held. You can simply write them next to the company names. You do not have to provide full dates, years would be sufficient. This would help you prospective employer to quickly understand how many years of experience you have in each position.
Also, once you have established that you are a hard-working, diligent person, you do not need to repeat it when explaining your work experience.
Finally, pay attention when writing the word "career," it is not "carrier." A carrier is a big warship that carries warplanes on its deck.