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Biography: Jing-Ren (Luo羅景仁) With a master’s degree in OOOOOOOOO from OOOOOOOO OOOOO OOO University and a bachelor’s degree in OOOOOOOOO from OOOOOOOO OOOOOOO University, I am eager to apply for the position of chemical engineer in your company, which was listed on the OOOOOO job portal. I believe my strong academic background and practical experience are a perfect match with this position. I underwent extensive hands-on training in areas including organic synthesis and inorganic materials analysis. This demonstrated to me the value of patience and meticulous thought in conducting research, because there is no easy way to make certain that you have exhausted every resource and found the best approach to the project at hand. Another insight I gained in graduate school, where I was fascinated by the research process, is that when facing difficulties, determining the root of the problem is always the first step. This should be followed by logical thought and precise application of practical experience. I completed my master’s thesis, “O O-O OOO O O O O O O O,” after successfully developing a novel material that exhibited greater catalytic stability. In addition to my practical and theoretical training, I possess strong communication and crisis management skills. At college, I joined the OOOOOOOOO department’s student association as an activities director to support OOOOOOOOO OOOOOO camps across OOOOOOO’s OOOOOOO District. Under my leadership, the team raised OOOOO as much funds as the previous year, and membership increased by OO%. I also helped troubleshoot any unexpected problems that arose at camp events. Last year, I went to OOOOO for a working holiday. One valuable lesson I learned from this experience is that a little empathy is crucial to communicating and getting along well with people from around the world. Accordingly, I have sought to develop my communication skills, and strive to always tackle problems with the correct attitude. These are skills that I believe fit well with a job requiring teamwork. I am eager to sharpen my practical experience, and I believe that my character, training and expertise will enable me to make a valuable contribution to your company.
It is better not to start your autobiography with “My name is...” Rather just put a title at the top, like “Biography: OOOO-OOO OOO(OOO).”
“I am a master from OOOOOOOO OOOOO OOO University, Department of OOOOOOOO” should be written like this: “I have a master’s degree in OOOOOOOOO from National OOOOO OOO University.”
It is redundant to say “My purpose to write this is to apply for the position of...” You can just say: “I am applying for the position of...”
“In graduate school period” should be “While I was at graduate school,” or just “In graduate school, I...”
I am not sure what you mean by “Reviewed the thought logically and then prepared experience design to prove.” Based on the context, I have changed this to “This should be followed by logical thought and precise application of practical experience,” but please check if this is really what you meant.
You say you held OOOOOO camps in “OOOOOOO.” I changed this to “OOOOOOO’s OOOOOOO District,” to be more precise. If you are referring to a different OOOOOOO, please change it.
Avoid using words like “moreover” if you are not sure how to use them.
You say “I went to OOOOO for working holiday last year,” but do not give much further information. You could add more information about what jobs you worked at, what skills and experience you gained, and how long you were there.