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Dear Sirs:

I graduated from National O O University with a Master's degree in Chemistry, specializing in Electrochemistry. My Masters thesis focused on the energy of O-O materials using the electrochemical method. In order to complete my study, I used various techniques including using a Scanning Electron Microscope (SEM) and Transmission electron microscope (TEM) to confirm my hypothesis.

While studying at National O O University, I also took an introductory course in Semiconductor and Advanced Nano-technology Process and realized the value of its technique for producing semiconductor processes, since this technique is essential for the manufacture of high-tech products.

In OOOO, I also participated in O O O Seminar and obtained the opportunity to give a presentation. This valuable experience helped to shape me into a good writer and presenter of reports that can give a presentation even in the high pressure situation of an important meeting.

I am currently freelancing and pursuing new opportunities. Although I am new to the industry, I believe it provides numerous possibilities. I’m well-trained and well-prepared to face new challenges.

修改建議:
A great cover letter, well done!

You have provided in-depth detail of your academic experience, but your letter would also benefit from highlighting any work experience that you have, such as part time jobs while studying. This would allow you to demonstrate to the employer key transferable skills such as communication, team-working or leadership skills, gained while working.

Always make sure you proofread the letter to get rid of typos and spelling mistakes!

If possible, try to tailor the cover letter to the specific company you are applying for by, for example, stating what attracted you to apply for a position at their company.