6年以上經驗/大學/會計學類

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My name is O, I am from O.

I obtained a bachelor’s degree in accounting at O University. During my college years, I learned to organize activities and honed my coordination skills as a class representative.

From OOOO to OOOO, I gained experience in accounting and auditing services at O O.

As an auditor, my main duties included examining financial statements and income tax audits.

During that time, I learned to work efficiently in a limited timeframe. Engaging with different clients also enhanced my communication skills.

I am currently working at the O duty-free shop. My work includes making financial statements and preparing project documents. I helped the company improve its workflow.

My work experience has given me a strong sense of responsibility and professional finance knowledge, which are necessary for the position I am applying for.

I believe my rigorous attention to detail and positive attitude will serve your company well.

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