半導體設備工程師
1~5年經驗／大學／電機電子維護學類
Biography: OOO(中文名) With a major in Computer Science from OO University and several years’ experience in a variety of jobs, I am eager and confident to apply for the position of semiconductor equipment engineer. I have been working as a sorter equipment engineer at OO Service Co., Ltd. since March 20OO. My previous experience includes working as an etching equipment engineer at OO Electronics Co., Ltd., and equipment engineer at OO Optoelectronics Co., Ltd., as well as stints at OO Tribute Products Co., Ltd.’s summer school; Taichung’s OO OO International Hotel; OO Enterprise Co., Ltd. (OO); OO Foods Co., Ltd. and OO System Integration Co., Ltd. My duties have also included document management systems integration and telephone customer service. While a complex work environment and time pressures inevitably cause stress, I have learned that trained patience and a careful attitude sets me in the right frame of mind to face any challenge, while applying hindsight promotes continuous improvement. I can summarize my work attitude as ambitious and enthusiastic; I am willing to accept challenges and will go all-out to complete tasks required by the company. Before completing my compulsory military service, I was a part-time employee at a food factory, where I worked on the production line, cleaned machines and operated the package shrink-wrapping machine. This job taught me that sharing labor halves the effort to achieve the best performance. I would like to apply for a position as either semiconductor equipment engineer, assistant engineer or production equipment engineer. My preferred industries are consumer electronics manufacturing and semiconductor manufacturing. My computer skills include Microsoft Office applications (Word, Excel, PowerPoint), as well as Windows 7, Windows 98, Windows Vista, Windows XP and Windows 2000 operating systems. My other skills include electronic data networking, warehousing, inventory taking, file and data entry processing, and using and maintaining hand tools, electronic equipment and mechanical products. Thank you for taking the time to read my biography. I hope to have the opportunity to contribute my efforts to your company. I will do my best to fulfill the company’s expectations, so that I may grow into a bright future with the company.
Be consistent with how you write your name. You first have it as “O O O” and later as “OO O.”
“Im major in Computer Science” should be something like “I majored in Computer Science.”
Make sure of the actual names of institutions, and pay attention to which letters are capitalized and which are lowercase: “OO University,” not “OO university.”
Try to start your biography with something interesting or something that sums up your personality or experience in a few short sentences. Try to find something that highlights your suitability for the job. I added an introductory paragraph describing your experience and qualifications. Having this at the top of your biography makes it immediately clear what makes you a suitable candidate for the job.
You seem to have used online translation to create parts of this biography. Be very careful of doing this, because you ended up with the following embarrassing and meaningless example: “because trained patience, careful degrees and Compression sex, I also develop the right frame of mind to face transaction.” Your biography was very difficult to understand, so I tried to supplement it with material from your resume.
For some reason, some of your paragraphs are filled with double or even triple spaces. This makes your biography look messy, and creates the impression that you do not pay attention to details.
Also, pay attention to punctuation: Spaces and commas should never have spaces before them, but they should always be followed by spaces (unless they are followed by a bracket or quotation marks.) This will create a better impression and show that you have an eye for detail and good organizational skills.
“fulfill companys expectations” should be “fulfill the company’s expectations”. Always run a spell-checker before sending out your resume!
“Thanks again for your reading my resume” should rather be something like “Thank you for taking the time to read my resume.”