國際貿易人員

1~5年經驗／大學／貿易學類

修改後自傳：

【Background】
My name is O-O O. I graduated from the International Business Department of OO University this year. I have been described as being independent and responsible, and I continue to learn the importance of cooperation and communication.

【Education】
Besides school studies, I have also obtained a professional license for International Trade Management Class C by self-study. In my senior year, I scored OOO and O.O in TOEIC and IELTS, respectively. During the second semester of my senior year I applied for the exchange student program and studied in the OO University of OO, OO in the OOO for about half a year. During this time I learned valuable lessons about being independent and overcoming challenges.

【Activities】
In addition to part-time employment to supplement my finances, I have engaged in other extra-curricular activities to broaden my horizons. As a freshman, I worked as a salesperson at a food exhibition, learning about how exhibitions are run and how to communicate with customers. In my junior year I participated in the National OOO University student B2B Cross-Border e-Commerce Competition, which gave me the opportunity to understand more about Cross-Border e-Commerce as operated by OOO.

【Goal】
I now look forward to further enhancing my skills, with a view to being in a position to make a contribution to the success of the company I join.

修改建議：
While recognizing faults in yourself and admitting characteristics generally looked at negatively by society are admirable, I would avoid them in a biography for the purposes of seeking a job.

Saying that you used to prefer working alone and have been depressed in the past may well be true and quite normal, it is best not to mention these things in a resume. There’s a lot positive about your proclivity to work by yourself, for example, such as your willingness to leave your comfort zone and look for opportunities overseas. Emphasize the positive.

Your general level of English is very good, and you communicate your point well. If anything, you need to improve your knowledge of more natural word choices, collocations and turns of phrase.

Good luck in your future endeavors, and remember to stay positive in your assessment of yourself.