半導體製程工程師

1~5年經驗／碩士

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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is O-O O. I received a master’s degree in chemistry from National O O University and have one-and-a-half years of experience in the semiconductor field, particularly in lithography. I am excited to apply for the position of process engineer.

While working at O O O as a lithography process engineer, I became familiar with wafer fabrication and semiconductor lithography. I was responsible for solving technical problems in the production line, dealing with hold lots and refining processes to improve yield, as well as a productivity improvement project aimed at elevating capacity to increase profits. This experience taught me how to quickly and thoroughly analyze problems, as well as how to remain organized while working in a high-stress environment.

For my master’s thesis, entitled “OOOOOOO-OOOO,” I utilized the SEIRA effect to construct a high-sensitivity method for protein analysis. For my research, I used various equipment, including a scanning electron microscope, Raman microscope and infrared microscope, to confirm my hypothesis.

Throughout my master’s, I was responsible for collecting optics images with a high-value instrument. I also became familiar with operating AFM, tip-enhanced Raman and FPA-FTIR spectroscopy systems. At the end of my degree, I gave a presentation at an annual analytical chemistry conference. This valuable experience helped shape me into an excellent writer and presenter.

I love jogging to relax and strengthen myself, and consider one of my great achievements to be running a full marathon. In college, I was the softball club’s chief planning director responsible for arranging competitions, for which I had to learn how to effectively negotiate with members from different departments.

In the future, based on the knowledge that I have acquired and working experience I have accumulated, I am keen to devote myself to the COMPANY NAME process engineering team. I am confident that I can achieve the target of any given task and help customers solve their manufacturing challenges.

Sincerely,
O-O O

修改建議：
Very good English!
I did not have to change very much, but here are some suggestions:

●Use the recruiter’s name instead of “Sir or Madam” if you know it.

●All of your history is in your CV -- the autobiography is a chance to tell stories that will show the company how you might be as an employee. So instead of just saying that you learned how to quickly analyze and solve problems, you could tell a story about a time when you had to overcome a challenge in your job. Similarly, instead of just saying that you learned how to negotiate with others as the softball club’s planning director, you could tell a time when you had to negotiate a difficult event.

●If you can, add some specifics about the company you’re applying for and why you are excited to work for them in particular. A company likes to see that you’re passionate about working there, not just anywhere. Also, if you put in the time to learn about what they do, it will show you have a good work ethic.

Good luck!

Kayleigh