業務銷售

1~5年經驗/大學/醫務管理學類

修改後自傳:

My name is O O. I am OO years old. I hold a Bachelor’s degree with a major in medical management and have been working as a sales representative most recently. My TOEIC score is OOO (listening: OOO; reading: OOO).

I also have a license in baking.

In 20XX, I sold English courses in China with O O. My responsibilities included understanding clients’ needs and resolving their problems, as well as arranging tailored learning schedules for them, placing an emphasis on customer relations and after-sales service. Having the opportunity to travel to the China headquarters to help organize sales conferences gave me the chance to enhance my communication skills and gain experience in leading a team. I proved myself to be a fast learner, capable of adapting to all situations, as well as delivering high-quality work with minimal supervision.

Prior to this, from 20XX to 20XX, I worked in sales for OO Realty. My responsibilities included collating local community information and pricing for potential buyers. Again, this was an opportunity to develop my abilities in working as part of a team and doing after-sales service.

I am a reliable, independent, positive and motivated person with a hard-working attitude and a desire to learn and make a valuable contribution to my employer.

修改建議:
Are you 28 or 29? Your Chinese resume says 29. Include your surname.

Structure: education/ professional qualifications; work experience (most recent first); personal qualities. Don’t mix them up.

Don’t include Chinese characters.

You don’t include what you have been doing since May 2017. Why?