6年以上經驗/大學/英美語文學類

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AUTOBIOGRAPHY:

My name is O, I expect to be graduate from O University in June. Because my parents are open-minded about my education, I have become an optimistic and active person, even when I encounter difficulties or face harsh conditions. I always pass through my difficulties quickly and find ways to solve my problems.

I am a responsible person. In my college life, I never ped out of a class just because it was too difficult for me. On the contrary, I always feel excited by classes that can both challenge me and make me stronger. On the other hand, I have made a great deal of friends in school. I have learned a lot of social skills from them.

I have learned English in various ways. Not always sticking to the traditional method of reading textbooks, I am highly interested in learning English through songs, radio, TV shows and movies. I also enjoy reading because in my point of view, reading increases my knowledge. In addition, I like to learn new computer skills. I have gained a number of certificates in computing, but there is always more to learn.

I started working part time when I was a junior in college. I worked in the "O O," which is a place that our school set up to encourage students to speak English. Because I translated for foreign teachers, I still learned a great deal about the interaction between students and teachers. Outside school, Im translated in the Fall and Spring Education Expo. That experience not only strengthened my confidence in English, but taught the value of trying new experiences.

I am well prepared for the workplace, and because of my strong desire to learn and my patience when faced with frustrating situations, I think your company can take me into your consideration. Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing back from you soon.








Cover Letter

No.O, Ln. O, Sec. O,
O Blvd. O Dist.
O OO City OOO
Taiwan (R.O.C)

11 April 2011



Ms. Lin
Human Resources Director
Perfect International Study Group
OF., No.O, Sec. O, O N. Rd.,
O Dist., OO City OOO
Taiwan (R.O.C.)

Dear Ms. Lin:
  I read your advertisement for an English Administrative Assistant position in yes123 Job Bank with great interest. As my enclosed resume indicates, my qualifications match your needs. Please consider my candidacy.
  In June this year, I will earn a Bachelor of Arts in English at O University. I worked at a part-time job in the fall and spring education expositions. That job not only taught me how to act professionally toward customers, but also helped me realize where my passion is. In addition, I have strong computer skills including, Microsoft office, which the position of Administrative Assistant requires.
Should my background match your research employment opportunities, I would be interested in meeting with you. I can be reached by phone at 0900000000 or by E-mail at OOOO@OOOOO.com Thank you.

Yours sincerely,
O O

修改建議:
  One thing I would suggest with this resume package is to not be so humble and to tell the prospective employer more about why you would make a good employee.

  Most employers have to read thousands of resumes a month when they are hiring people. It is a very boring job, especially when people write too little about their passions.

  It is very important to tell research the company you are applying for, and know what they need before you apply for the job. This should be stated clearly in the objective.

  For example, if you are applying for a sales job, in the objective you should write: “To contribute to the bottom line of a sales organization by bringing in new accounts and improving existing accounts.” That what any boss of sales wants to hear: that you will make more money by bringing in more accounts.

  The administrative assistant position is similar. It was good that you knew Microsoft Office was an important bit of knowledge to have for the job. But what other task would be required of an administrative assistant? Interpersonal skills, telephone skills, industry knowledge. If you don’t know the answers to these questions, find them out and add them to the objective.

  Overall, it’s a good first resume, but it should be made more exciting, especially in the objective.