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6年以上經驗／大學／英美語文學類
My name is O O. I am a positive and patient individual and my friends describe me as an energetic and independent person. I obtained a Bachelor of O degree from O O University in OOOO in Foreign Languages and Applied Linguistics. With O years of intensive learning in English and Japanese, I obtained a TOEIC blue certificate (score: OOO), and JLPT, level N3. When I was in college, I worked as a waitress at O’s O restaurant for O years. This job gave me the experience of having frequent contact with different types of people. With my patient and positive personality, I often felt a sense of accomplishment while at work. Furthermore, I learned how to manage different relationships and organize group activities. After my graduation, I immediately went to O for a working-holiday for O years. I worked many different kind of jobs and made lots of friends from all of the world. I traveled to many cities in O and visited other countries as well. The great memories have enriched my work experience and made me a better person.
An good cover letter, well done.
Make sure you spell the name of companies correctly, e.g O, not ‘O.’
Make sure you use the correct verb tense e.g. “I learned how to manage different relationships and organizing group activities” — the second verb should also be past tense: organized.
Remember to space out the paragraphs so they are easier to read.
The letter is a little too general and finishes rather abruptly. Try to tailor your letter to the specific field of work and company that you are applying for. Match your skills to those of the job that you are applying for and try to mention what attracted you to apply for the job and why you think you would be a good fit for the position.