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碩士
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is O-O O. I received a master’s degree in chemistry from National O O U....修改建議：
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碩士/材料工程學類
Biography: OO O O O (中文名) Being on the verge of attaining a master’s degree from National OO Univ....修改建議：
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碩士/光電工程學類
Dear Sir or Madam, For my undergraduate degree, I studied mechanical engineering at OOOOOOO Univers....修改建議：
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碩士/材料工程學類
Biography: O, O-O (OOO) I am a specialist in the field of polymer processing, with a master’s deg....修改建議：
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大學/化學工程學類
My name is O-O-O, I am from O. I studied chemical engineering at National O University of O. I am....修改建議：
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碩士
Dear Sirs: I graduated from National O O University with a Master's degree in Chemistry, speciali....修改建議：
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大學/化學工程學類
My name is O O O. I was born in O, O, and grew up in O. I graduated from National O University of ....修改建議：
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碩士/微生物學類
I am a graduate student studying in at National O O University, majoring in Laboratory Biotechnology....修改建議：
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碩士
Biography: Jing-Ren (Luo羅景仁) With a master’s degree in OOOOOOOOO from OOOOOOOO OOOOO OOO Universi....修改建議：
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碩士/電機電子維護學類
My name is O-O O. I am from O City, Taiwan. I am seeking a position as a semiconductor engineer, a j....修改建議：
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碩士/材料工程學類
Biography: O-O O (OOO) I am applying for a position as semiconductor engineer, a job for which I ....修改建議：
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大學/數理統計學類
Dear [sir/madam], I grew up in OO with O elder sister and graduated from O O University with a de....修改建議：
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大學/化學工程學類
Autobiography I am ＯＯＯ-ＯＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯＯ. ＯＯＯＯＯ is my English name. I was born in ＯＯＯＯＯＯ, but I grew up an....修改建議：
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碩士/光電工程學類
Biography: ＯＯＯＯ-ＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯＯ Telephone: E-mail: Family Background My name is ＯＯＯＯ-ＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯＯ, and ....修改建議：
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博士/光電工程學類
I was born in Ｏ, Ｏ. I am the oldest son, the oldest grandson and the oldest great grandson in my fam....修改建議：
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碩士/化學工程學類
My name is Curtis Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ. I am Ｏ years old and graduated from ＯＯ University of Technology in Ｏ with a....修改建議：
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博士/物理學類
Ｏ, Ｏ-Ｏ ? Citizenship: Ｏ (Ｏ.Ｏ.Ｏ.) ? Date of birth: Ｏ ＯＯ, ＯＯＯＯ Contact details Tel: 06-0000000 C....修改建議：
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碩士/電機電子工程相關
Ｏ, CHEN Ｏ-Ｏ ＯF.-3, No.Ｏ, Ｏ St., Ｏ Dist., Ｏ City Ｏ Taiwan (R.O.C.) Tel: 00-0000000/0900000000 E....修改建議：
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碩士/電機電子維護學類
Ｏ-Ｏ Ｏ ＯF, No. Ｏ, Ｏ Street, Ｏ District, Ｏ Ｏ City Ｏ, Taiwan (R.O.C.) Phone: Ｏ E-mail: Ｏ Obje....修改建議：
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碩士/機械工程學類
Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ ＯF., No.Ｏ, Ｏ St., Ｏ Dist., Ｏ Ｏ City 000, Taiwan (R.O.C.) Phone (Home): +886-0-00000000 ....修改建議：
Resume: 1)A very strong resume with just a few grammar....