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  • 大學/會計學類
    My name is O, I am from O. I obtained a bachelor’s degree in accounting at O Univers....
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    Don’t forget to leave a space after each punctuation ma....
  • 大學
    My name is OOOO OO OOOO and my English name is OOOOO. I am a graduate of OOOOOOOO University in OOO....
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    Excellent cover letter, well done! “There are five p....
  • 碩士/其他商業及管理學類
    Dear Hiring Manager, My name is O-O O. I come from OO, Taiwan. I obtained a bachelor’s degree in ....
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    At the interview, emphasize your experience maximizing ....
  • 大學/貿易學類
    My name is O O. I am a student at O O University, majoring in International Business. I have amassed....
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    An excellent, detailed cover letter, well done! Ensu....
  • 碩士/企業管理學類
    Biography: O O-O (OOO) Our ancestors said: “A decent man is easygoing but not cliquey; neutral wi....
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    I added more information to the first paragraph, summar....
  • 大學/一般商業學類
    To whom it may concern, I have excellent accounting skills, the foundations of which were built w....
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    - Letter was too long. The person looking through appli....
  • 大學/會計學類
    Autobiography I was born in OOOOOO. There are five people in my family: my father, mother, sister....
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    A good, concise resume with all the necessary informati....
  • 大學
    In OOOO, when I was OO, my family decided to immigrate to OO. I graduated from O University of Te....
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    Strong resume. When applying to O companies, rewrite au....
  • 碩士/企業管理學類
    Autobiography My name is O-O O. People know me by my music, approachable personality and fun-lovi....
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    When applying for Western companies, rework into a cove....
  • 碩士/經濟學類
    O O-O No.O, O 2nd Rd., O Township, O County O, R.O.C. O / O O@hotmail.com ===================....
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    Made a few corrections on resume, for example the acade....
  • 大學/統計學類
    My name is O O O, and I was born on O. O, in O. [What year?] As the youngest child, with an older b....
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    I did not see the resume, so I cannot deliver a critiqu....
  • 碩士
    Family background and personality: My name is O-O O. I am OOyears old and I come from a scholarly f....
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    Was unsure what you were trying to say in some of the l....
  • 大學
    Chen O-O 0F, No. 0, Lane 00, O St, O City, O County 000, Taiwan +886 900-000000 O@O.O.com.tw ....
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      This well-constructed resume demonstrates solid Engli....
  • 大學/法律相關
    O-O WU Address: 0F, No.0, Alley 0, Lane 0, O 1st St., O City, O County, O (R.O.C), 00000, O Tel: ....
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    Resume:   1)Spelling and grammar were excellent and th....
  • 大學/復健醫學學類
    O O Li Address: OF., No.OO, O St., O Dist., New Taipei City 247, Taiwan (R.O.C.) Home phone: 02-....
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      The overall appearance of your resume is very importa....
  • 國中
    O O Mobile Phone: +886 900 000000 Email: OO@gmail.com OF, No. O, Lane O, O Rd. Sec. O, O Distric....
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      Overall a focused and comprehensive resume and autobi....
  • 碩士/會計學類
    Personal Profile Name : O-O PAI O Date of Birth: Jan. 1....
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    An excellent cover letter. Your business English seems ....