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大學/會計學類
My name is O, I am from O. I obtained a bachelor’s degree in accounting at O Univers....修改建議：
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大學
My name is OOOO OO OOOO and my English name is OOOOO. I am a graduate of OOOOOOOO University in OOO....修改建議：
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碩士/其他商業及管理學類
Dear Hiring Manager, My name is O-O O. I come from OO, Taiwan. I obtained a bachelor’s degree in ....修改建議：
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大學/貿易學類
My name is O O. I am a student at O O University, majoring in International Business. I have amassed....修改建議：
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碩士/企業管理學類
Biography: O O-O (OOO) Our ancestors said: “A decent man is easygoing but not cliquey; neutral wi....修改建議：
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大學/一般商業學類
To whom it may concern, I have excellent accounting skills, the foundations of which were built w....修改建議：
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大學/會計學類
Autobiography I was born in ＯＯＯＯＯＯ. There are five people in my family: my father, mother, sister....修改建議：
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大學
In ＯＯＯＯ, when I was ＯＯ, my family decided to immigrate to ＯＯ. I graduated from Ｏ University of Te....修改建議：
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碩士/企業管理學類
Autobiography My name is Ｏ-Ｏ Ｏ. People know me by my music, approachable personality and fun-lovi....修改建議：
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碩士/經濟學類
Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ No.Ｏ, Ｏ 2nd Rd., Ｏ Township, Ｏ County Ｏ, R.O.C. Ｏ / Ｏ Ｏ@hotmail.com ===================....修改建議：
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大學/統計學類
My name is Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ, and I was born on Ｏ. Ｏ, in Ｏ. [What year?] As the youngest child, with an older b....修改建議：
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碩士
Family background and personality: My name is Ｏ-Ｏ Ｏ. I am ＯＯyears old and I come from a scholarly f....修改建議：
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大學
Chen Ｏ-Ｏ 0F, No. 0, Lane 00, Ｏ St, Ｏ City, Ｏ County 000, Taiwan +886 900-000000 Ｏ@Ｏ.Ｏ.com.tw ....修改建議：
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大學/法律相關
Ｏ-Ｏ WU Address: 0F, No.0, Alley 0, Lane 0, Ｏ 1st St., Ｏ City, Ｏ County, Ｏ (R.O.C), 00000, Ｏ Tel: ....修改建議：
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大學/復健醫學學類
Ｏ Ｏ Li Address: ＯF., No.ＯＯ, Ｏ St., Ｏ Dist., New Taipei City 247, Taiwan (R.O.C.) Home phone: 02-....修改建議：
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國中
Ｏ Ｏ Mobile Phone: +886 900 000000 Email: ＯＯ@gmail.com ＯF, No. Ｏ, Lane Ｏ, Ｏ Rd. Sec. Ｏ, Ｏ Distric....修改建議：
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碩士/會計學類
Personal Profile Name : Ｏ-Ｏ PAI Ｏ Date of Birth: Jan. 1....修改建議：
An excellent cover letter. Your business English seems ....