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大學/醫務管理學類
My name is O O. I am OO years old. I hold a Bachelor’s degree with a major in medical management and....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
My name is O O. I was born in OO. I graduated from O O University with a Bachelor’s degree in foreig....修改建議：
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碩士
After earning a master’s in business administration, I returned to my hometown, OO, the Silicon Vall....修改建議：
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大學/中國語文學類
My name is OO. I am a graduate of OO University with a Bachelor of Arts in Chinese Literature. I hav....修改建議：
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碩士/企業管理學類
My name is O-O O. I’m flexible, tender and work well under pressure – always with a smile. I was bor....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
My name is O. I graduated from O University in Taichung this year with a bachelor’s degree in Englis....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is OOOO. I was born in Kaohsiung and graduated from OOO-OO University, w....修改建議：
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碩士/企業管理學類
Dear Sir or Madam, I am O O, a salesperson with more than OO years of experience in IT-related fi....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Biography: O O O OOO I am a graduate of O University with a major in O O. I was born in O, and gr....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
My name is O. I’m a graduate of National O University. I had wanted to learn English for a long time....修改建議：
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博士/企業管理學類
[Personal Profile] I was born in OO, Taiwan and have maintained social, economic and cultural ties ....修改建議：
An excellent, well-structured resume and cover letter, .... -
專科
I studied fashion design at O O University, because I believe I have inherited the artistic talents ....修改建議：
Start your CV by introducing yourself, not your family..... -
大學/電機電子工程相關
1. Family Introduction My name is O-O O. Throughout my youth, my parents would not assist me righ....修改建議：
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大學/其他商業及管理學類
Biography: O O O (OOO) I am a cautious and pragmatic person who is eager and willing to learn ne....修改建議：
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大學/一般法律學類
Biography: O O O O (OOO) Introduction I am eager to apply for the position as sales representat....修改建議：
I have used your English name, O, in the heading of you.... -
大學/英美語文學類
I am an open-minded, self-motivated, positive and independent person who is interested in people and....修改建議：
Personalize the application for the position. Add [nam.... -
大學
My name is ＯＯＯＯＯ ＯＯＯＯ-ＯＯＯ and I would like to apply for the position of XXXX at your esteemed compan....修改建議：
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專科
Cover letter To whom it may concern Employment search I am interested in a position at your c....修改建議：
Since you are applying for a job in the USA, I changed .... -
大學/一般商業學類
Autobiography I am currently the Sales Account manager in ＯＯＯＯ(ＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯＯ) Corp. I have learnt tha....修改建議：
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碩士/機械工程學類
PAST AND FUTURE I received my master’s degree in Mechanical Engineering in 2000. I worked as a re....修改建議：
I reorganized the information slightly and made the for.... -
大學/語言學類
Cover letter Dear Personnel Manager I am an optimistic person who likes to face regular challeng....修改建議：
The candidate’s resume is very basic, although with goo.... -
大學/德文語文學類
Biography Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ. I am ＯＯ years old and come from a wonderful area in Taiwan wit....修改建議：
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大學/資訊管理學類
Resume: Ｏ Ｏ Applicant: Ｏ Ｏ (Ｏ-Ｏ, Ｏ) Address: Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ, No. Ｏ, Lane ＯＯ, Sec. Ｏ, Ｏ Rd., Ｏ Ｏ Dist.....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Allison Ｏ-Ｏ, Ｏ No.Ｏ, Ｏ St., Ｏ Dist, ＯＯ City Ｏ, Taiwan (R.O.C.) Mobile phone – (+Ｏ) (0) 0900-000-00....修改建議：
’s resume needs a lot of work. Obviously, she doesn’t h.... -
大學/一般商業學類
Personal Details Name: Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ Date of Birth: Ｏ June Ｏ ( Married with Ｏ child – Age at Ｏ and....修改建議：
Ｏ Ｏ Ｏ is very experienced. Because of this, he makes a .... -
大學/西班牙語文學類
CURRICULUM VITAE Personal Information Name: Ｏ, Ｏ Birthday: Ｏ Oct. Ｏ Nationality: Taiwanese....修改建議：
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大學/企業管理學類
Personal Profile Name: Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ Date of Birth: Jan. Ｏ, Ｏ Gender: Ｏ ....修改建議：
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專科
(To whom it may concern) Introduction It is my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce ....修改建議：
The grammar needed a bit of work. Some parts were uncle.... -
大學/英美語文學類
AUTOBIOGRAPHY My name is Ｏ Ｏ-Ｏ I was born and bred in Ｏ-Ｏ. I have an outstanding brother so my....修改建議：
There is not much I can do to improve this resume. It i.... -
大學/行銷與流通學類
XXX ____________________________________________ PROFILE: _____________....修改建議：
The overall quality of the English in this resume is .... -
大學/英美語文學類
JENNIFER Ｏ.Ｏ. LIN Ｏ@hotmail.com 0900-000-000 PERMANENT ADDRESS ＯF,No.Ｏ,Lane Ｏ Sec. Ｏ, Ｏ ....修改建議：
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大學/英美語文學類
Emma Ｏ-Ｏ Li Room Ｏ, ＯF, No. Ｏ Ｏ R. Ｏ, 00000 Taiwan TEL: +886-900-000-000000 E-Mail: Ｏ@yahoo.com....修改建議：
The resume was good because you wrote interesting thi....